Yesterday, we looked as some key phrases, which signal a need for editing. How often have you seen the ones I have listed below in your reading(s)? I am certain there are several in my books, which I should have recognized at the time, but I sometimes miss because I am so wrapped in the story/plot.
completely destroyed (“Destroyed” indicates beyond repair or completely.)
consensus of opinion (“Consensus” indicates a solidarity of opinion.)
end result
funeral service (A funeral is a “service.”)
final outcome
the reason is because
temporary reprieve (All reprieves are “temporary.”)
in a dozen different states (The difference is obvious.)
eyewitness
There are better ways of saying each of the following phrases:
as a general rule becomes generally (or) as a rule
by the same token becomes likewise
at the same time as becomes simultaneously
as a matter of fact becomes in fact
extend an invitation becomes invited
with the exception of becomes except
absolutely certain becomes certain
during the course of becomes during
on account of becomes because
at one fell swoop becomes simultaneously
Again, add your favorites to the comments below. We each of a particular phrase, which sets our teeth grinding.
I have to laugh when I see this list. I kept mouthing ‘guilty’ ‘guilty’ ‘guilty’ as I read down. There is no need for me to think of more with that many I have to work on already. Haha!
I admit, Sophia, that after the publication of my book, I look back and think “Idiot! You should have caught that one!”